英语高手们,我有一份演讲稿,请帮忙看看有没有语法错误之类的问题,顺便帮我改一下!

英语高手们,我有一份演讲稿,请帮忙看看有没有语法错误之类的问题,顺便帮我改一下!
Good morning everyone!My name is Anny.I'm very happy to stand here.Today I'd like to say something about "my favourite sport".My favourite sport is swimming.I like summer,because in summer I can swimming.Swimming is good for our healthy.So I often swim with my friends in the afternoon.Please come on with us.Let's swimming!Are you ready?Thanks for listening!
提防 2020-07-30 悬赏5金币 已收到3个回答

驴在后面追

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总体上是没什么问题啦~但是你这个稿子里面很多句子都是以I 和My开头的,有点重复.一般要是想更出彩一些,更正式一些的话,可以多变换一下句型来表示同样的意思.下面是我帮你改的,你看看是不是喜欢.用你自己原来的也可以,我这份就是改的多样了一点~
Good day everyone!My name is Anny.It is my honor to stand here today.In this very lovely morning,I'd like to share some ideas about "my favourite sports".My favourite exercise is swimming.Swimming even makes me like summer because I can swim the most the this season.Also swimming is good for our health.I often swim with my friends in weekend afternoon.Do you want to join us?Come on,let's go swimming together!Are you ready?Thanks for listening!
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但见樱花开

共回答了87个问题

Good morning everyone!My name is Anny.I'm very happy to stand here.Today I'd like to say something about "my favourite sport".My favourite sport is swimming.I like summer,because in summer I can swim....
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agress

共回答了95个问题

写的不错,只是有几个语法错误。because in summer I can go swiming/swim. It is good for our health. (healthy是形容词). Please come with us. Let's go swimming!
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