帮我检查一下这篇英语作文请仔细检查有没有语法错误,谢谢May 12th is an unforgettable day

帮我检查一下这篇英语作文
请仔细检查有没有语法错误,谢谢
May 12th is an unforgettable day for all the Chinese people.There was a serious earthquake on that day in Sichuan Province.The buildings fell down suddenly and thousands of people died. I was very sad when I heard of the news.
All the Chinese people get together to overcome the difficulties.Most people donated money to them.,so did I.The soldiers and the doctors tried their best to save more people and they never give up!
I hope the Sichuan peole can rebuid their hometown early. I believe tomorrow will be better!
滴滴清泪 2020-07-30 悬赏5金币 已收到3个回答

lupus7218

共回答了83个问题采纳率:85%

There was a serious earthquake 最好不要这样说
a serious earthquake shocked all the Chinese people 地道点
Most people 换成many 吧
看得出来像个初中生吧
好好学习吧
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纷飞冷雨

共回答了15个问题

and they never gave up
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caym529

共回答了40个问题

除了作后一段PEOPLE拼错
好像没有别的错误了
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