请帮助改一下英语语法错误和单词错误

请帮助改一下英语语法错误和单词错误
the old campus is a good
place to go, because it has a long history. It has many historical sites in
which people can see and understand. For example, many old buildings
have witnessed College UPS and downs. Often the ceremony, the old
campus is a good place. Second, why the old campus is a
great place to visit, it reflects the school's philosophy and values. People can recognize the old
building and campus environments. For example, one can see the
whole scene on campus, such as the construction of the campus celebrity, they
came. So we can look at the statue in
the value of the school, which, on the contrary, we can not find them in the
new campus. Third, one can find a lot of good memories at the old campus. This is especially true for those from their university. The old campus is definitely a
good precious memories have when visiting the old campus. At that moment, they will feel that they went back to a familiar
place. The
old campus will alert the feelings of friendship, between teachers and students
between students. Those memories, they are
definitely life's most valuable asset. The fourth reason is that the
old campus is a more comfortable environment. There is no doubt that the old
campus has stunning scenery, we can focus on our souls. Faced
with such a charming environment where people can relax your body and mind. And I can learn to relax in the
school's history and spirit of the school, Wisdom and Faith. We can through the school
building, to see how ancient people in difficult learning environment, provide
warning for our future so the old campus is worth your place.
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It has many historical sites in which people can see and understand (what) . 你的in which 相当于where从句缺宾语

why the old campus is a great place to visit, it reflects the school's philosophy and values. (比较随意的表达吗?) the reason why ..is that..

,(when) they come.

which, on the contrary, can not be found in the new campus.定语从句要求缺主语或宾语

后面的还看吗 加点分可以吗

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