自己写的英语作文.请帮忙修正.一篇对比文.比较以前的自己和现在的自己.刚学英语.很多错误.请帮助修正.Me –now v

As we know everyone has recollected things,I would like to hold on these memories.Compared to adult me and child me,there are many differences between these two.However,the truth is that adult me and child me are so different,but still be a same person.“Child me” and “Adult me” in three sides make each one quite distinct from the other.
Outward appearance is perhaps the first difference.When I was a kid,I had long hair.I cut my hair when I met loss; it can help me broken dejected.So I have short hair now.As is opposed to child me,adult me is like a fat cat.Although this may be true,I still self-hypnogenesis:I am a slim-Jim.
The second difference is sense.For instance,child me is really artlessness.I thought everyone could be a nice person in this wonderful world in the past.But I met many bad person when I am walking on my life road.I can hardly believe anyone.I know I have losed my artless heart.Whereas I was very happy in the past,but it could not be back.
Finally,perhaps the most striking difference between the two of me is personality.For whatever reason,I was a lively girl in the past.I had a lot of friends.On the other hand,I am shy and cannot get along well with others now.In fact,I usually play the role of oyster in crowd.Being the opposite of child me,I always talked and talked.I cherish the memory of when I was monitor until I finish my primary school.Moreover,unlike child me,I prefer staying at home than going out now.
As is mentioned above,child me and adult me are completely different.But the two also have some similarities.Like hobbies filial sentiments.I am still keeping these.The combination of different things prove my growing up.Certainly,I will never forget the words from my grandma:“If you are a piece of gold,whatever you do,whoever you are,wherever you go,you will shine when you find a real-self.”
我已经帮你改好了,有较多错误,但作为初学者是很了不起的了.